Both Nazm and comment are beautiful. The cycle of storm and norm goes on in life. Infact mountains are defined by valleys.. Life goes on as we adapt these extreme events! Tandeep Ji, thanks for introducing such great writers and their works. Your comments are extremely motivating, the reason Aarsi community is so healthy and focussed.
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Respected Dr Mann saheb...bahut hi sohni laggi laghu nazam...thanks for sharing...
ਬਿਜਲੀ ਕੜਕੀ
ਨ੍ਹੇਰੀ ਚੱਲੀ
ਝੱਖੜ ਝੁੱਲਿਆ
ਬਰਬਾਦੀ ਹੋਈ
ਫਿਰ ਸ਼ਾਂਤ ਮੌਸਮ
ਜਿਵੇਂ ਕੁਝ
ਹੋਇਆ ਹੀ
ਨਾ ਹੋਵੇ!
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Bahut khoob!! I really liked it.
ਤਨਹਾ ਭਰੇ ਸ਼ਹਿਰ 'ਚ ਮੈਂ ਸਾਂ ਰਾਤ ਇਸ ਤਰ੍ਹਾਂ,
ਵਰਕਾ ਜਿਵੇਂ ਤੂਫ਼ਾਨ ਵਿਚ ਖੁੱਲ੍ਹੀ ਕਿਤਾਬ ਦਾ।
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Tamanna
Both Nazm and comment are beautiful.
The cycle of storm and norm goes on in life. Infact mountains are defined by valleys..
Life goes on as we adapt these extreme events!
Tandeep Ji, thanks for introducing such great writers and their works. Your comments are extremely motivating, the reason Aarsi community is so healthy and focussed.
Keep up the great work!
Regards,
Gurinderjit
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